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Just as poignant on the re-read. A beautiful and thought-provoking sentiment, thoughtfully presented. A simple set of keys ...

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Thank you Karena

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Charlie 🥺 you did all you could. Thank you for sharing Sean's story with us.

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Thank you Christin

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Great piece. Beautifully written, it gets better every time I read it. Bravo :)

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Thank you Silvio

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Beautiful. Every time I read it, I find myself being pulled into the essay. Thank you for sharing your story Charlie!

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Thank you Michelle

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Nov 21, 2022Liked by Charlie D. Becker

Human stories rule and this one kept me going all the way through to the end. Love this prompt too. Thanks for sharing it here.

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Thank you Rick

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This was beautiful thank you for sharing

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In awe of your writing Charlie. Thank you for sharing the story.!

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A beautiful, vulnerable piece of writing. Thank you for sharing this with us. Stories like this one stay with me.

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Thank you Jordan

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Nov 22, 2022Liked by Charlie D. Becker

Very moving Charlie. Best thing I've read in a while. Wow.

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Thanks John

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Nov 22, 2022Liked by Charlie D. Becker

This is a brilliant essay @Charlie. Thank you so much for sharing

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Nov 22, 2022Liked by Charlie D. Becker

The way you wrote it (which I think is a brilliant idea) — reminds me of Ako’s “Seen, Felt, Heard, Taste”, where she recounts her experiences through bodily senses.

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Thank you Leo--I will need to check it out

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This is such a beautiful essay, Charlie! This is my second time reading it, and I felt so much emotion both times. Thank you for sharing this story.

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Thank you Neilda

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I just reread this again. It's as beautiful, if not deeper, than the first time I came across this. You've got me crying crocodile tears on the train.

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Not sure who "Sean" was or when HE WAS BORN. But sorry for your lose.

I have learn recently that when you grow up sorrounded by an less than balanced family, you are prone to end sharing your life with similar people. Be careful who you grow close in the future. Makes for an awesome reading, yet I know you can approach any kind of genres with your neverending talent.

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